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I had a kundalini experience last week where the bliss eventually reached my head for a short time. After that I remembered thinking without doubt that meditation or samadhi is beyond any other form of hedonism. Now to convince anyone else that bliss exists..

The American "Whose Line Is It Anyway?" which is off the air.

Receptive, blissful, working on wired.

When I saw this thread, I pictured a detachable cartoon ass.

To be blunt and broad.. My feeling is that America is pumped full of fear and drugs. While the drug companies are out to make a buck with mood disorders; which I see as a product of over-thinking and societal ignorance. I will not put myself in a defensive stance or a guilt-trip over some pro-medication majority that wants me to stop grinning at them. I look forward to the entropy and collapse of this culture.

Sipping Mountain Dew Voltage and 100 proof Vodka. By trying to write with the full brunt of my articulation, I'm studying Hemmingway, Hitchens, and Bukowski.

I've been gung-ho about going into and staying in deep meditative experience, the same as Kundalini. These sometimes come with side effects, my most recent side effect was strongest yesterday, having my head feel like vibrating metal when I lost concentration, like a tuning fork in use-- which though I'm skeptical of "chakras" its said that the two in the head vibrate together. Though this could be a type of seizure I'm not so inclined to believe its a bad thing, with it being part of a longstanding culture with long-living people, and speaking for the subjective instances apart from it.

I approve of short/shoulder-length hair (not mine, I need haircut).

I have a couple revisions, the second and third are similar. '"He was hitting on one of the serving wenches as he usually does."' The 'does' in this line kind of puts it in present tense, it would work better with 'did' at the end. 'Jake gave her a dumbfounded look. "The black horse with a white mark on his forehead. Why would you ask that? Are you going to steal him from me?" He gave a nervous laugh at the audacity of her question.' It would be better to break up one of the sentences that's not in quotes and put it into its own paragraph. '"And most importantly of the charges," The woman cut him off, "is being an accessory to the murders that took place at the Hodges Star Ranch in Lawson." Her voice dripped with venom at mentioning the last charge.' Similar thing here, I'd make the last sentence its own paragraph. Otherwise its good.

I happen to be a hick school dropout. No Problem.

I have revised myself a lot, and I'm very critical to make as little mistakes as possible, so take my guidelines however you want. '..now there are the dead skeletal remains of trunks and branches.' 'Dead skeletal remains' is making the same statement more than once, which is something to watch out for in writing. It would be better to use 'remains', 'skeletal remains', or 'dead remains'. 'Fifty years ago this was rural farmland in what used to be known as the state of Tennessee. Now it's a desolate wasteland.' Its best to stay in one tense, preferably past tense. You could still use 'Now' it would just be 'Now it had become a desolate wasteland.' '"I'm not about to walk away from this house, it will be dark soon and I need it for protection. It looks like the zombie will have to move out the hard way." Red made up her mind to take over the house by force.' This is tricky, it sounds like you would rather have your character thinking. If so, there's different ways to do that, but quotes should be kept specific to talking. The above segment is also a double statement, you want to keep either the dialogue or the sentence afterwards, and then keep arrest of this paragraph. Hope you found this helpful. Keep writing!

May they someday take over.

New Boxer Rebellion, hell yeah.

Because I can envision this song where "we" is replaced with "Phee."

I'm going to end up deleting my FB this year, I really should have done it a long time ago. I'm staying away from social networking sites and sticking to forums as far as the internets goes.

Scattered, calm, motivated, demotivated, pleasantly and horribly lost, alone, not alone, good, crummy, slightly sleepy, awake, an aversion to raw vegetables, ect.

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