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sick and twisted murderous thoughts

through my brain they creep about

flashing steel till the blood won't stop

I cannot let these voices out

bring back stoning and lepers and slaves

and for all the sinners who will not be saved

bring back the CHRIST child.....

so i can finally stand

next to someone nice

(This is about society and how much angst and grief it gives me)

no, see - you got this thread wrong... it's for "terrible" gothic poetry, not good stuff!!! :stuart::laugh:

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That's my favorite one EVAR!!

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This IS astounding and original, seriously('nother thread).

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Here, THIS is GOTH...

'I see, these visions, sometimes,

projected upon the lids of my eyes,

Woah-oh th' sorrow 'tis overwhelming,

it delves deep into my heart and then I think I'm drowning.

My lungs, they twitch, as I am gasping for air,

I call out for assistance, and no one is there.....'

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ANANGRYGLAREISTAREACROSSTHEROOMINTODARKNESSITRYTOSHAKETHISFEELINGOFRAGE

THEREISNOWAYTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTAWAYOUTITISIMP

OSSIBLETOSEEANYTHINGHEREINTHEPLACEMYBRAINTAKESMEWHENWEGOTHISFARANDTHEY

KEEPPUSHINGTRYINGTOCRUSHTHISSPEEKERWHOISSTILLASEEKERLOOKINGFORTHEWAYOUT

ANDITDOESNOTLOOKGOODFORTHEGOODGUYSRIGHTNOWANDTHEONLYWAYOUTSEEMSTOBE

DEATHBUTITISSOFAROFFWHYARETHOSEAILIENSNOTHEREYETTOSAVEUSFROMUSITISSOBAD

HEREANDITDOESNOTLOOKLIKEITISEVERGOINGTOGETANYBETTERANYTIMEANDISTILLCANNOT

FINDTHEDOORBUTIAMGOINGTOKEEPLOOKINGUNTILIFINDITORTHEYCRUSHMEFORGOODANDIDO

GRINBLAZESATOPMYCHINANDYOUSEETHESTRIPEOFCYNICYSMANDGIGGLEUNCOMFTORABLYI

STILLSITSTILLANDWAITFORYOUANDIWILLUNTILLTHEJUDGEMENTDAYCOMEANDTHENIHAVETO

GOTOWORKANDIDONOTRELISHTHETHINGSIMUSTDOONTHATDAYBUTALLFORTHEBESTTHEYSAY

BUTNONECANTELLMEWHYORWHOHIDTHEDOORBUTIWILLLETYOUINONASECRETTOMOROWOKAY

(edited for spelling but not grammar)

Edited by Rev.Reverence
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ANANGRYGLAREISTAREACROSSTHEROOMINTODARKNESSITRYTOSHKETHISFEELINGOFRAGE

THEREISNOWAYTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTTOFINDAWAYOUTAWAYOUTAWAYOUTITISIMP

OSSIBLETOSEEANYTHINGHEREINTHEPLACEMYBRAINTAKESMEWHENWEGOTHISFARANDTHEY

KEEPPUSHINGTRYINGTOCRUSHTHISSPEEKERWHOISSTILLASEEKERLOOKINGFORTHEWAYOUT

ANDITDOESNOTLOOKGOODFORTHEGOODGUYSRIGHTNOWANDTHEONLYWAYOUTSEEMSTOBE

DEATHBUTITISSOFAROFFWHYARETHOSEAILIENSNOTHEREYETTOSAVEUSFROMUSITISSOBAD

HEREANDITDOESNOTLOOKLIKEITISEVERGOINGTOGETANYBETTERANYTIMEANDISTILLCANNOT

FINDTHEDOORBUTIAMGOINGTOKEEPLOOKINGUNTILIFINDITORTHEYCRUSHMEFORGOODANDIDO

GRINBLAZESATOPMYCHINANDYOUSEETHESTRIPEOFCYNICYSMANDGIGGLEUNCOMFTORABLYI

STILLSITSTILLANDWAITFORYOUANDIWILLUNTILLTHEJUDGEMENTDAYCOMEANDTHENIHAVETO

GOTOWORKANDIDONOTRELISHTHETHINGSIMUSTDOONTHATDAYBUTALLFORTHEBESTTHEYSAY

BUTNONECANTELLMEWHYORWHOHITTHEDOORBUTIWILLLETYOUINONASECRETTOMOROWOKAY

Me so dizzy now!!!!! :teehee:

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i love you

you love me

homosexuality

people think

we're just friends

but we're really

lesbians.

oh wait that is not very gothic is it?

how about

i hate you

you hate me

misanthropy

people think

we are freaks

fuck them.

I honestly think yous could put another totally disconnected stanza in there to connect them...

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darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

darkness

Darkness

What an interesting comparison in the verse between modern socialism with the current democratic state in Turkey...

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To be alive in the death of the dead live dead

The dark blackness of the darkness blackens us in the dark

LOVE

The beast from inside the middle within the inside growls

The moon above in the sky of the night of the sky is the moon.

BLOOD

The red flows from the redness of her lips that are red

lightning strikes the thunder as it rolls into the lightning.

FIRE

The questions that query the answers of forgotten questioning

Pain that hurts and causes my pain to hurt in the pain.

SEX

Time fades into the past as the future embraces the nowness

Kisses in the lips of the mouth of the tounge the kiss

ALONE

ALONE

ALONE

*fin*

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