The Kanuck Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Last night, when I was like half asleep this popped into my head so I wrote it down. Just thought I put it up, nothing too big. I live my life, like I rest my head at night, On edge, waiting to fall. My backed turned on the only people I could ever turn to. Naked, exposed. Hiding nothing from: The world, Everyone, You. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maeve Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 I think this is very good. I like the way that you have broken the stanzas, very effective. Nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Homicidalheathen Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 O0ohhh.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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