soothsayer Posted March 22, 2005 Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 Bow down kiss my feet Lay down talk so sweet I have - I have I have spoken to your God I don't even know your name She said watch one die And you'll never ever be the same You talk about peace You talk about pain You talk about life and then you take it away You talk about war like you talk about it Like you talk about me Close your eyes and think I will let you sleep I have - I have I have been to the other side I don't even know your name She said watch one die And you'll never ever be the same You talk about peace You talk about pain You talk about life and then you take it away You talk about war like you talk about it Like you talk about me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marblez Posted March 22, 2005 Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 good one sooth! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paradox Posted March 22, 2005 Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soothsayer Posted March 22, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 Why thank you both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paradox Posted March 22, 2005 Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 do you post in any poetry sites? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soothsayer Posted March 22, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 Oh Hell No - **LOL** I consider what I write to be lyrics not poetry. Poetry actually puts me to sleep but I can see where this might be looked at as a poem. Why do you ask?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paradox Posted March 22, 2005 Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 :( i write poetry! but its good. there was a site i was on that wasnt too bad, but it changed and i havent been able to figure out how to switch the sub etc. anyway, on with the show! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soothsayer Posted March 22, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 Oh - um, well I've read your work and it didn't put me to sleep. See, I am awake. :laughing: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paradox Posted March 22, 2005 Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 hello? hello? did you just nod off? :laughing: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marblez Posted March 22, 2005 Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 sooth, i read it as lyrics, not a poem. Perhaps because i know you. Anyway, aren't lyrics just poetry set to music? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soothsayer Posted March 22, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 Oh sure - get technical on me. It's a fine line, such a fine line between what it is or what it could be. < Damn I'm good....I'm using that for something. :laughing: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soothsayer Posted March 22, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 sooth, i read it as lyrics, not a poem. Perhaps because i know you. Anyway, aren't lyrics just poetry set to music? <{POST_SNAPBACK}> She knows me!?!?!?!?!?!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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