SuZQZ Posted November 27, 2007 Report Share Posted November 27, 2007 Much better. Tighter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fierce Critter Posted November 27, 2007 Report Share Posted November 27, 2007 I just noticed that in your 2nd use of the term "industrial flex" that the "r" is missing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scales Posted November 27, 2007 Report Share Posted November 27, 2007 Looks good. Only thing left I notice is some minor grammatical errors - missing apostrophe's, some descriptions have periods, some don't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaf The Horse With Tears Posted November 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2007 OK, I think I am at like 90% done. After looking at these graphics every day for two weeks I have had to think back to my younger years when the Colonel was still on TV commercials... I don't remember him being bent to the right. So why is he bent to the right on every KFC logo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msterbeau Posted November 27, 2007 Report Share Posted November 27, 2007 The brown stripes below the main Creighton graphic are clashing with the yellow. I'd desaturate them some so they appear more like the "commercial development" letters. Or maybe something else entirely. I would add a snazzy entry page too. The home page doesn't have enough zing in it, in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaf The Horse With Tears Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 That stripe is a shared content banner for a company logo that I have as yet to put in because I have not been able to shoe horn anyone in to giving me one. Which is the main reason I have not mucked with it's color as yet. I'd love to make the front page a bit more snazzy, but I don't really know how. I'm learning how to do this as I go after all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Winter Steele Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Big improvement looking good ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msterbeau Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 That stripe is a shared content banner for a company logo that I have as yet to put in because I have not been able to shoe horn anyone in to giving me one. Which is the main reason I have not mucked with it's color as yet. I'd love to make the front page a bit more snazzy, but I don't really know how. I'm learning how to do this as I go after all. An entry page would be the first thing a visitor would hit... even before they got to the home page. Do a snazzy little Flash animation thing and then have it automagically go to the home page after 4-5 seconds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaf The Horse With Tears Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 I don't know Flash programing, at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msterbeau Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 I don't know Flash programing, at all. Oh. How was that little animation done that you had when you first started this ? Did i miss something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaf The Horse With Tears Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 That was just an animated gif. Thats easy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fierce Critter Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 For the record, I despise those flashy, initial "THIS IS MY SUPERCOOL WEBSITE INTRODUCTION PAGE!!" wastes of my time. Especially where a serious business is concerned, I find them exceptionally annoying. And I like flashy shit. I used to be in-house DP for several companies, and I hated it that I couldn't do flashy shit. But I'm older now, and more mature. Sometimes flashy shit is just... well... shit. No offense, Marc. That's just how I roll. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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