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[Troy Spiral (13)]

Whats wrong with this posts grammar structure, punctuation? Spelling ?

That does seem like an odd series of reactions there. First he complains that the "cops aren't doing their jobs", so then you suggest "well get off your ass and do something about it rather than complain" and he responds with "its not my problem why would i get involved". What was he bitching about if he doesn't care? I guess it could be interpreted just as a complaint that "someone isn't doing their job" not that he actually cared about the crime or its effects.

In terms of the more general point of vigilantism: Really that's long been sorted out as a solution that causes more problems than it solves. Political/Social activism is probably the correct response in all but the most dire of specific life threatening situations.

Thats my post in a different area of the forum. I know there are issues with it, I'm just not sure were they all are.

[Tryp]

I'm too lazy to point them out. Lol.

[freydis]

Whats wrong with this posts grammar structure, punctuation? Spelling ?

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That does seem like an odd series of reactions there. First, he complains that the "cops aren't doing their jobs". So then you suggest: "well get off your ass and do something about it rather than complain", and he responds with "its not my problem why would i get involved". What was he bitching about if he doesn't care? I guess it could be interpreted just as a complaint that "someone isn't doing their job", not that he actually cared about the crime or its effects.

In terms of the more general point of vigilantism: Really that's long been sorted out as a solution that causes more problems than it solves. Political/Social activism is probably the correct response in all but the most dire of specific life threatening situations.

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Thats my post in a different area of the forum. I know there are issues with it, I'm just not sure were they all are.

That's the only edits I'd do. Spelling was fine, it was mostly punctuation I'd change.