Marblez Posted April 28, 2005 Report Share Posted April 28, 2005 LATE NIGHT CINDERELLA I painted you a pretty picture again, she says with pride A lovely portrait, a beauty her chin up, eyes wide Your Michaelangelo, your covergirl, queen of your guilty dreams She showers you in exquisite warmth as she polishes her golden wings Lover, again, just one time more keep her in your dark eyed gaze The dawn is on it's steady path This picture too soon will fade She's your late-night Cinderella futility, it plagues her fight restrained by the duality as her crystal dreams take flight Withering canvas, sepia tones colors fade to none the dreams of yesterday are sold over, finished...done Lover, again, just one time more keep her in your dark eyed gaze The dawn is on it's steady path This picture too soon will fade I painted you a pretty picture again, she says with pride... shame the one from yesterday apparently had lied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soothsayer Posted April 28, 2005 Report Share Posted April 28, 2005 Very good. It flows very well Marblez. I had no idea you could write lryics. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torn asunder Posted April 28, 2005 Report Share Posted April 28, 2005 very nice! this is one that needs to be read a few times to get the most out of it, i think... well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marblez Posted April 28, 2005 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2005 THanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaneDead Posted April 28, 2005 Report Share Posted April 28, 2005 i love it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marblez Posted April 28, 2005 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2005 i love it!! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Thanks Dyno! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soothsayer Posted April 28, 2005 Report Share Posted April 28, 2005 So when did you start writing lyrics Marb? Was this a recent thing or ? Details please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TomCat Posted April 28, 2005 Report Share Posted April 28, 2005 =) It is so good, I had to read it twice. Great writing Marblez! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marblez Posted April 28, 2005 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2005 I hadn't written in a long time and suddenly felt like putting pen to paper. THis is the culmination of approximately 3 hours of brainstorming, writing and revising - yesterday. Not a long drawn out process...just a whim really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brenda Starrr Posted April 28, 2005 Report Share Posted April 28, 2005 Schweet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FarrIL Posted April 29, 2005 Report Share Posted April 29, 2005 My opinion still stands after I read it on MySpace AND here..... It kicks arse. I love it. ;3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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