soothsayer Posted May 1, 2005 Report Share Posted May 1, 2005 I wrote this for my daughter. Another night came and went without you I sat here and thought about calling I longed to hear your voice again When will this suffering end? Another day came and went without you I went about my day thinking of you I thought about the things we might have shared I wondered if you knew how much I really cared? Another moment in life came and went without you It seemed to fill the void that your absence brings I thought about how you smiled and laughed But the silence that surrounded me could not be broken I drew another picture just for you today But you're not here to enjoy what I labored for in vain I stopped myself from shedding a tear Even though no one is here to witness my pain A dream about you came and went last night It was so beautiful to see you once more But when I awoke I was reminded of how alone I was I almost believed you would be waiting at my door I want you to know how much I love you And someday what is wrong will no longer be I miss you like no other before or since Because in my heart you'll always be with me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FarrIL Posted May 1, 2005 Report Share Posted May 1, 2005 That's really pretty, I like the flow of the words and the concept. Nicely done, Sooth. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soothsayer Posted May 1, 2005 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2005 Thank you. I sat down and within 3 minutes it was done. I have really bared my soul with this. These are all my thoughts and feelings and they just poured out and I couldn't have stopped them if I had wanted too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brenda Starrr Posted May 1, 2005 Report Share Posted May 1, 2005 =( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soothsayer Posted May 1, 2005 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2005 Still makes me feel that way too every time I have read it today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paradox Posted May 1, 2005 Report Share Posted May 1, 2005 :tear beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soothsayer Posted May 2, 2005 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2005 Thanks Paradox. Actually I thought you might rub my nose in the fact that I wrote a poem. You didn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paradox Posted May 2, 2005 Report Share Posted May 2, 2005 no. i write poems too. and i have a daughter. i can relate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soothsayer Posted May 2, 2005 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2005 Again, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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