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[Raev]

This is the first draft. Written today in about 3 minutes. I'll be going back through this one and cleaning it up, it's my newest musical project. Feel free to give me feedback/constructive criticism. I also need a name for it.

Sometimes I wonder what I want from this

my pen to the paper when my heads a mess

no one will ever hear this

but continue, I'll persist..

How many of you there saw the tears I cried?

Who among you were there when my spirit died?

For so long I hurt, I tried

to run from it, to run and hide

Inside a bottle, doing this or that

wrapped up inside of the misery I had

Never saw the things that should of made me glad

Self absorbed, blame the pain inside

Everyone around me, I vilified but

never did shit to make it right

Never woke up til someone died

Now here I am, unbreakable this time

running on my new grand design

I know I'll never get what I want from this

my pen to the paper til my heads not a mess

I don't want money or fame

Just want serenity, stable, sane

....and we are all the same

[Simon Bar Sinister]

1. I like it.

2. call it "what I want from this", maybe?

[Rev.Reverence]

...nice work so far...

...I'ld title it "sorting" or "sorted" depending on if the speaking voice finishes sorting or not...

[Raev]

...nice work so far...

...I'ld title it "sorting" or "sorted" depending on if the speaking voice finishes sorting or not...

Thank you two for the kind words on it.

I haven't finished sorting yet...

[Scales]

I like it, it has heart.

[Rev.Reverence]

Thank you two for the kind words on it.

I haven't finished sorting yet...

..no worries my man!

...& I did not figure it was done/sorted yet