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February 17, 2009 in Your Creations

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Posted February 17, 2009

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Posted February 17, 2009

Fetid.

Cold blue orbs,

Graying strands.

Rotted mouth

Spews hatred.

Serrated words

Scream toxins.

Anger burns.

No mercy.

Unforgiving

Soulless bitch.

Heartless mind

Deteriorates joy.

Bitter cell

Traps bigotry.

Fantastic narcissism

Thy kingdom.

Lonely death.

Hellfire burns.

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Posted February 19, 2009

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Posted February 19, 2009

Nice.

It has a feeling of self-hate turning into external hate.

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Posted February 19, 2009

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Posted February 19, 2009

Thank you

I like your take on the poem too!

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