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[Guest Megalicious]

violentivy has joined in, and will be the Saturday writer!

I SAW THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!

EVERYTHING, I have read is fucking fabulous. Still looking forward to re-reading the VF series .... but man.... *waits impatiently for the new "Finding Decemeber" post*

[freydis]

I SAW THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!

EVERYTHING, I have read is fucking fabulous. Still looking forward to re-reading the VF series .... but man.... *waits impatiently for the new "Finding Decemeber" post*

Very soon..... it will be the start of a new week!

[Guest Megalicious]

*whines* But, I want it NOW LOL

I kid, I kid - partially anyway theheh.

[freydis]

phee's first page is up NOW.

[Rev.Reverence]

...dudes...

..um.......I don't know how to say this...but..um...ya'll NEED to edit betta'...I was attempting to read the piece by Cix (& it is imaginative & all the good things I could say, not to descriptive, but still vivid)...there are a large number of grammatical errors, & some semantic breaks (wrong words for usage).

..."princes" should have apostrophe...

..in a church or a temple, we prAy (not prey, we leave that to the dirty Catholics, right?)...

...god, in Perfect god, should really be caps, it is a proper noun...

...a Tomb is where you put dead peoples, a Tome is a big ass book you might read in a monastery or at my house...

The understanding was that in any journey, peril and fortune come hand in hand.

(Yeah, I know the last on is fairly stringent grammar on my part...but I notice these things, 'cause I read allot of dusty old books with the English from England of about an-hundred years ago...& more.)

I out of Love & a Will to see my friends & acquaintances look as good as they can... LUVZYOUZ!

[freydis]

...dudes...

..um.......I don't know how to say this...but..um...ya'll NEED to edit betta'...I was attempting to read the piece by Cix (& it is imaginative & all the good things I could say, not to descriptive, but still vivid)...there are a large number of grammatical errors, & some semantic breaks (wrong words for usage).

..."princes" should have apostrophe...

..in a church or a temple, we prAy (not prey, we leave that to the dirty Catholics, right?)...

...god, in Perfect god, should really be caps, it is a proper noun...

...a Tomb is where you put dead peoples, a Tome is a big ass book you might read in a monastery or at my house...

(Yeah, I know the last on is fairly stringent grammar on my part...but I notice these things, 'cause I read allot of dusty old books with the English from England of about an-hundred years ago...& more.)

I out of Love & a Will to see my friends & acquaintances look as good as they can... LUVZYOUZ!

I depend on the participants editing their own stuff... perhaps I'll pass this on?

in additional news.....

My page two is up!

[Guest Megalicious]

I depend on the participants editing their own stuff... perhaps I'll pass this on?

in additional news.....

My page two is up!

I KNOW! I read it last night .... I loved it.....

[freydis]

[Rev.Reverence]

I depend on the participants editing their own stuff... perhaps I'll pass this on?

in additional news.....

My page two is up!

oooooH...that'll explain it... & cool yeah...tell'em all they can find a REV to catch what he can...but I'm not even perfect..but I try.

...& seriously...all statements were made out of luv.

[CixWicked]

...dudes...

..um.......I don't know how to say this...but..um...ya'll NEED to edit betta'...I was attempting to read the piece by Cix (& it is imaginative & all the good things I could say, not to descriptive, but still vivid)...there are a large number of grammatical errors, & some semantic breaks (wrong words for usage).

..."princes" should have apostrophe...

..in a church or a temple, we prAy (not prey, we leave that to the dirty Catholics, right?)...

...god, in Perfect god, should really be caps, it is a proper noun...

...a Tomb is where you put dead peoples, a Tome is a big ass book you might read in a monastery or at my house...

(Yeah, I know the last on is fairly stringent grammar on my part...but I notice these things, 'cause I read allot of dusty old books with the English from England of about an-hundred years ago...& more.)

I out of Love & a Will to see my friends & acquaintances look as good as they can... LUVZYOUZ!

AWESOME... I'll go in and fix all these errors right now. I apologize for putting you guys through this stuff... I'll get better, but I'm -really- terrible with Grammer, and the likes. It's a flaw that I'm trying to better, so any and all feed back to make my work more readable/enjoyable is more than welcome.

Cix

[Rev.Reverence]

AWESOME... I'll go in and fix all these errors right now. I apologize for putting you guys through this stuff... I'll get better, but I'm -really- terrible with Grammer, and the likes. It's a flaw that I'm trying to better, so any and all feed back to make my work more readable/enjoyable is more than welcome.

Cix

Hey, I'll proof read for you if you'ld like...you know where I am

[CixWicked]

So I went through and did some of the editing as suggested by The Sweet Ninja Rev. LOL. Again, I apologize, I realize my spelling and grammar are -HORRIBLE-... they always have been. But I'll work on making sure that things get a lot better and a lot easier to read.

IF -ANYONE- has questions, or comments, I'm all about them. I'm an open book, and you all have crayons... feel free. LOL.

God that sounded terrible.

Cix

Oh, and by the way... I tend to throw in way too much extra grammatical content. Commas and apostrophes flying every which way. People tend to laugh their asses off at me for this. ::SHRUG:: I'm working on it.

[CixWicked]

Hey, I'll proof read for you if you'ld like...you know where I am

Hell yeah, shoot me an email.

I'll have things to you by the tuesday before my posts are due, so you're not rushed to do anything. AND don't be afraid to give me pointers about content as well as presentation. "Umm... yeah, the purple cow comment is kind of cheezy... i'd loose it if I were you..." Not a big deal.

Thanks again Rev.

Cix

[Rev.Reverence]

Hell yeah, shoot me an email.

I'll have things to you by the tuesday before my posts are due, so you're not rushed to do anything. AND don't be afraid to give me pointers about content as well as presentation. "Umm... yeah, the purple cow comment is kind of cheezy... i'd loose it if I were you..." Not a big deal.

Thanks again Rev.

Cix

I hate the email...it is SO cluttered...PM me

[CixWicked]

I hate the email...it is SO cluttered...PM me

LOL... Alrighty.

Cix

[CixWicked]

You should see some of the lyrics I wrote...

My guitarist goes. "Look at you trying to be all Rock star, misspelling words, and carrying on..." My GF goes. "Umm... no, he's a horrible speller... to his feeble mind, that -looks- right."

lol

[freydis]

Hey.... nobody's perfect.

Anybody read the end of Garon's story today?

I thought it was pretty funny.

[CixWicked]

Hey.... nobody's perfect.

Anybody read the end of Garon's story today?

I thought it was pretty funny.

It was freaking Brilliant. Can't to see what else Gar's got hidden beneath those sleeves.

Cix

[phee]

Got more stuff up....

[jynxxxedangel]

Good work, my friends.

[phee]

More of my stuff up

[freydis]

Page four of Finding December is up!

[Guest Megalicious]

Page four of Finding December is up!

I KNOW, I READ IT, ITS AWESOME.

You, YES YOU... GO READ IT NOW!!!!!

[freydis]

I KNOW, I READ IT, ITS AWESOME.

You, YES YOU... GO READ IT NOW!!!!!

:happydance

[phee]

More of mine is up folks