Samples Of My Writing & Poetry....

[Fred Fox]

If you have my Facebook page, you already have access to all of these, but for those who don't i want to test out some of my latest material over the last 6 months. I'm always open to feedback & i hope you like what you read! Thank you

Sample #1 : I need a response (By : Fred Fox - 05.07.12)

Do you take feelings & resist? Or resist fighting them? My shield has new cracks everyday, & i keep sighting them, There's two ways to be rebellious. Which one do i die for? Two paths that i could cross. Which one will i find more? As i'm walking into the light, taking flight, with the white in my site, is this strategy right? Is my plan all that tight? Can i fight? Being Gifted & cursed & conflicted, All in one verse, i'm uplifted, do i have everything or do i have nothing to keep me going currently? how can i translate all of these feelings outwardly & internally? Will i win or will i loose? Is this from God or do i choose? Do i have what it takes or was all of this bullshit? If i hand you my heart how the fuck will you hold it? Should i wear black with parting words? Or do i wear white & scream til' i'm heard? Do i give up or fight til i'm breathless? My prayers need the answers, do you hear how i stress this?

Sample #2 : Cold Cold World ( By : Fred Fox - 04.30.12)

Another lifeless body on this earth of six billion...was he the weakness or the resiliance? Was he of kindness or even the villian? Or maybe brilliance, i guess we'll never know, he was just another piece in this galactic game show, the game of thrones, & everybody wants the power, but it's the list of select few who can repent in final hour, who can look you in your eyes, who can read between the lines, that had the heart equal to words, that conveyed message like mockingbirds, some are simply numbers , a lucky few get put in writing, some dont never lift a finger, & some will never stop the fighting, it's a cold cold world & life's a bitch & are you scared? Cuz i suggest that poker face can come up muthafuckin clear, your not exempt or an exception so do not bother doing the tuck, a bitch of a man is another one's supper, & don't expect a given fuck...

Saple #3 : Thief Of The Heart ( By : Fred Fox - 04.30.12)

A dream catcher : hand craft, my protector of night terror's, if i didn't love myself, i'd be cracking all the mirrors, & if i didn't love you too - i wouldn't hold you that much nearer, You've been breaking through these walls - & i've yet to see one fairer... Hours feel like minutes, life's this broken hourglass, Everytime you come around all i feel is powerless, Any love that i project - it seems that you devour this, i'd walk through every coal & flame with you -NO cowardice... The only anti-depressant i need is your muthafuckin lips, Your enflaming every vein of mine - your hips, your fingertips, I don't ever get like this, i jones like i am dopesick, Every word you ever utter, Echoes back, my mind's a gutter, I said life without music was like the earth without sun, but between you & all the notes, i could never pick "one"... Battle within, Angels in wind, you are my light, the closest thing to freedom, if i resist i'll loose the fight, You gave me a 2nd life, Grabbed the stars out of the night

Sample #4 : No Accident ( By : Fred Fox - 06.04.12) ...

I've always been different. I've always been mysterious.

I've always had the big sense of humour yet i'm serious.

Always the enigma, Always so complex.

I'm so miss-fuckin-understood it get's me vexed.

I try to be good, but sometimes i'm doing bad.

i laugh & flash a smile, in an instant i am mad.

Sometimes i give alot, sometimes i give a little,

Sometimes i'm up front, sometimes i'm giving riddles.

i've been the type of guy, who aint afraid to cry,

Cuz when you rub the red out of your eyes, you can see the bluest skies,

And i'm sorry : for anyone that i've hurt.

And your welcome : to those who've seen my worth.

I lost my Dad at 43 & right now i'm 24.

All i'm really trying to see is what exactly is in store.

i'm cried out. i've been dying internally,

I rise now... from the uncertainty.

Life's hard, where do i begin?

Try hard, yet i'm covered in sin,

The mistakes that i've made in life,

Re-defining everyday what is wrong & right.

I feel you, when i look in your eyes,

I see me, like the mirror that shines,

Lean on me, we have nothing to fear,

Fate will have it's way, it's no accident... we're still here.

we're still here.

it's no accident... we're still here.

I tried to take my life when i was 18,

i never woke up with a smile, my heart was aching,

Piling on me, like everyday it culminates,

Looking out my fucking window, what on Earth is my fate?

I needed signs, I needed dreams, I needed faith,

I had to look outside myself as i await for something great.

We're they right, that i'd never prevail?

That I could walk the plank & yet i'd never set sail?

No money, Just a penny & a dream.

Organic as it gets & no connections in the scene,

I yelled out, in case they weren't hearing me,

would these muthafuckas clap or would they start jeering me?

100 years it will be Fred Fox who?

So who gives a flying fuck if they judge what i do?

I wake up, and i put on my clothes,

Trying to be a better man : mental, spiritual growth,

I have haters, i am no exception.

I hear plenty of dumb shit that shall get no mention,

Get mad at them? or get mad at myself?

I can only be me, Never Ever someone else.

Life's hard, where do i begin?

Try hard, yet i'm covered in sin,

The mistakes that i've made in life,

Re-defining everyday what is wrong & right.

I feel you, when i look in your eyes,

I see me, like the mirror that shines,

Lean on me, we have nothing to fear,

Fate will have it's way, it's no accident... we're still here.

we're still here.

it's no accident... we're still here.

The high road is a perilous journey,

i thought i'd seen alot of shit, but don't forget i'm still learning,

I'm yearning, for some peace of mind,

I'm trying to give a little back, to the kids of my kind,

I got scars, I go hard, I have stories.

Doors been slamming in my face, yet i've seen a little glory,

I've seen enough to tell you cap up the pills,

Before you think your gonna go, you need to know what's real,

I am the joke, I am the cross & crucifix,

I've been provoked, I've come across the stupid shit,

Ganged up at a disadvantage,

So why then all the sudden am i so estatic?

I'm breaking through everyday that i'm breathing,

I'm reversing what they did, & i remain as their leaving,

The human spirit can't be trapped & confined,

You wan't me to give a fuck?

Get in the back of the line,

Victims come with me : i'm your ride tonight.

No more days we live to die : Cuz we survive tonight.

I love you, forget if no one else said it,

The day that you start doing you,

I swear to God,

You don't regret it...

Life's hard, where do i begin?

Try hard, yet i'm covered in sin,

The mistakes that i've made in life,

Re-defining everyday what is wrong & right.

I feel you, when i look in your eyes,

I see me, like the mirror that shines,

Lean on me, we have nothing to fear,

Fate will have it's way, it's no accident... we're still here.

we're still here.

it's no accident... we're still here.

[Troy Spiral (13)]

If you have my Facebook page, you already have access to all of these, but for those who don't i want to test out some of my latest material over the last 6 months. I'm always open to feedback & i hope you like what you read! Thank you

Sample #1 : I need a response (By : Fred Fox - 05.07.12)

Do you take feelings & resist? Or resist fighting them? My shield has new cracks everyday, & i keep sighting them, There's two ways to be rebellious. Which one do i die for? Two paths that i could cross. Which one will i find more? As i'm walking into the light, taking flight, with the white in my site, is this strategy right? Is my plan all that tight? Can i fight? Being Gifted & cursed & conflicted, All in one verse, i'm uplifted, do i have everything or do i have nothing to keep me going currently? how can i translate all of these feelings outwardly & internally? Will i win or will i loose? Is this from God or do i choose? Do i have what it takes or was all of this bullshit? If i hand you my heart how the fuck will you hold it? Should i wear black with parting words? Or do i wear white & scream til' i'm heard? Do i give up or fight til i'm breathless? My prayers need the answers, do you hear how i stress this?

Sample #2 : Cold Cold World ( By : Fred Fox - 04.30.12)

Another lifeless body on this earth of six billion...was he the weakness or the resiliance? Was he of kindness or even the villian? Or maybe brilliance, i guess we'll never know, he was just another piece in this galactic game show, the game of thrones, & everybody wants the power, but it's the list of select few who can repent in final hour, who can look you in your eyes, who can read between the lines, that had the heart equal to words, that conveyed message like mockingbirds, some are simply numbers , a lucky few get put in writing, some dont never lift a finger, & some will never stop the fighting, it's a cold cold world & life's a bitch & are you scared? Cuz i suggest that poker face can come up muthafuckin clear, your not exempt or an exception so do not bother doing the tuck, a bitch of a man is another one's supper, & don't expect a given fuck...

Saple #3 : Thief Of The Heart ( By : Fred Fox - 04.30.12)

A dream catcher : hand craft, my protector of night terror's, if i didn't love myself, i'd be cracking all the mirrors, & if i didn't love you too - i wouldn't hold you that much nearer, You've been breaking through these walls - & i've yet to see one fairer... Hours feel like minutes, life's this broken hourglass, Everytime you come around all i feel is powerless, Any love that i project - it seems that you devour this, i'd walk through every coal & flame with you -NO cowardice... The only anti-depressant i need is your muthafuckin lips, Your enflaming every vein of mine - your hips, your fingertips, I don't ever get like this, i jones like i am dopesick, Every word you ever utter, Echoes back, my mind's a gutter, I said life without music was like the earth without sun, but between you & all the notes, i could never pick "one"... Battle within, Angels in wind, you are my light, the closest thing to freedom, if i resist i'll loose the fight, You gave me a 2nd life, Grabbed the stars out of the night

Sample #4 : No Accident ( By : Fred Fox - 06.04.12) ...

I've always been different. I've always been mysterious.

I've always had the big sense of humour yet i'm serious.

Always the enigma, Always so complex.

I'm so miss-fuckin-understood it get's me vexed.

I try to be good, but sometimes i'm doing bad.

i laugh & flash a smile, in an instant i am mad.

Sometimes i give alot, sometimes i give a little,

Sometimes i'm up front, sometimes i'm giving riddles.

i've been the type of guy, who aint afraid to cry,

Cuz when you rub the red out of your eyes, you can see the bluest skies,

And i'm sorry : for anyone that i've hurt.

And your welcome : to those who've seen my worth.

I lost my Dad at 43 & right now i'm 24.

All i'm really trying to see is what exactly is in store.

i'm cried out. i've been dying internally,

I rise now... from the uncertainty.

Life's hard, where do i begin?

Try hard, yet i'm covered in sin,

The mistakes that i've made in life,

Re-defining everyday what is wrong & right.

I feel you, when i look in your eyes,

I see me, like the mirror that shines,

Lean on me, we have nothing to fear,

Fate will have it's way, it's no accident... we're still here.

we're still here.

it's no accident... we're still here.

I tried to take my life when i was 18,

i never woke up with a smile, my heart was aching,

Piling on me, like everyday it culminates,

Looking out my fucking window, what on Earth is my fate?

I needed signs, I needed dreams, I needed faith,

I had to look outside myself as i await for something great.

We're they right, that i'd never prevail?

That I could walk the plank & yet i'd never set sail?

No money, Just a penny & a dream.

Organic as it gets & no connections in the scene,

I yelled out, in case they weren't hearing me,

would these muthafuckas clap or would they start jeering me?

100 years it will be Fred Fox who?

So who gives a flying fuck if they judge what i do?

I wake up, and i put on my clothes,

Trying to be a better man : mental, spiritual growth,

I have haters, i am no exception.

I hear plenty of dumb shit that shall get no mention,

Get mad at them? or get mad at myself?

I can only be me, Never Ever someone else.

Life's hard, where do i begin?

Try hard, yet i'm covered in sin,

The mistakes that i've made in life,

Re-defining everyday what is wrong & right.

I feel you, when i look in your eyes,

I see me, like the mirror that shines,

Lean on me, we have nothing to fear,

Fate will have it's way, it's no accident... we're still here.

we're still here.

it's no accident... we're still here.

The high road is a perilous journey,

i thought i'd seen alot of shit, but don't forget i'm still learning,

I'm yearning, for some peace of mind,

I'm trying to give a little back, to the kids of my kind,

I got scars, I go hard, I have stories.

Doors been slamming in my face, yet i've seen a little glory,

I've seen enough to tell you cap up the pills,

Before you think your gonna go, you need to know what's real,

I am the joke, I am the cross & crucifix,

I've been provoked, I've come across the stupid shit,

Ganged up at a disadvantage,

So why then all the sudden am i so estatic?

I'm breaking through everyday that i'm breathing,

I'm reversing what they did, & i remain as their leaving,

The human spirit can't be trapped & confined,

You wan't me to give a fuck?

Get in the back of the line,

Victims come with me : i'm your ride tonight.

No more days we live to die : Cuz we survive tonight.

I love you, forget if no one else said it,

The day that you start doing you,

I swear to God,

You don't regret it...

Life's hard, where do i begin?

Try hard, yet i'm covered in sin,

The mistakes that i've made in life,

Re-defining everyday what is wrong & right.

I feel you, when i look in your eyes,

I see me, like the mirror that shines,

Lean on me, we have nothing to fear,

Fate will have it's way, it's no accident... we're still here.

we're still here.

it's no accident... we're still here.

Good stuff. Honestly I'd say about er... 20% of the "active" accounts on here are also connected on facebook, but on facebook (unless there are only like 4 friends) you don't get the "persistence" when you post that you have here, also the discussion tends to be just "comments" not really discussion. Not that that's bad or good its just a different style.

Did you see this here:

for fred

http://www.detroitgothic.net/index.php?showtopic=36875 ?