bean Posted July 14, 2005 Report Share Posted July 14, 2005 Dead Silence. Can you hear it? The calm before the white noise of oblivion breaks - sucking up those we hate, we love, we forgot. No one is safe. An end to the cycle of madness that is life. We all attain Nirvana - Our bodies feed the worms. Stop. The Storm approaches. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brenda Starrr Posted July 14, 2005 Report Share Posted July 14, 2005 You come up with some really good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikielikesit Posted July 14, 2005 Report Share Posted July 14, 2005 Very cool dudette............Its almost cheery ...HEH HEH.....I like it alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Medea Posted July 14, 2005 Report Share Posted July 14, 2005 I really liked that one. You are a talented writer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bean Posted July 15, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 Thanky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Guy Posted July 15, 2005 Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 Speaking as pope of the church of nothing, that was awesome. Notice how I don't ever comment on poetry either, ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bean Posted July 15, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 Speaking as pope of the church of nothing, that was awesome. Notice how I don't ever comment on poetry either, ever. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> I know, hehe...thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the eternal Posted November 11, 2005 Report Share Posted November 11, 2005 This is one of my favorites. I didnt expect the last line. I think it really brought the whole thing together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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