a little bit of Steven Poetry

[Steven]

Did you miss the straight and narrow?

Cause you've traveled very far.

Will you crush me? - I, the Sparrow....

Feeding off the hand of God

Tell me why do you receive them?

Those who steal the things you are?

Takes a window to reveal them

But your trying much too hard.

Did you miss the straight and narrow?

Will you even find the way?

What the song reveals is shallow

Till the listner learns his name....

[Brenda Starrr]

Wow, Steven. I love it.

[Steven]

You my friend, are very generous. Thanks Brenda.

Steven

[Brenda Starrr]

I'm not generous. I'm honest.

[Rayne]

That is awesome.

[Steven]

thank you ladies (blushing)

... dont know what to do with it yet, maybe a song, maybe a tattoo, its sort of the story of me in that poem, if I was to strip my life down.

[torn asunder]

i really dig the rythm in this - nice work!

[JaneDead]

i like it too