xanthein Posted February 7, 2006 Report Share Posted February 7, 2006 Let me take you down into a world untouched by pain,surrounding you in a void of time.I'll take you,I'll break you,I'll make you be just like me.I will not let you be untill you see,it's better to be free,than to live in a shell of lies.I'll take you,I'll break you,I'll make you be just like me,you will fall,you will crawl,to be what I am.I know you have the strength,I know you have the power,to live in the world of the living,and not of the dead.You must learn all that needs to be learned, before you can be the person you want to be... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hellion Posted February 7, 2006 Report Share Posted February 7, 2006 Let me take you down into a world untouched by pain,surrounding you in a void of time.I'll take you,I'll break you,I'll make you be just like me.I will not let you be untill you see,it's better to be free,than to live in a shell of lies.I'll take you,I'll break you,I'll make you be just like me,you will fall,you will crawl,to be what I am.I know you have the strength,I know you have the power,to live in the world of the living,and not of the dead.You must learn all that needs to be learned, before you can be the person you want to be... <{POST_SNAPBACK}> :devil Very well said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xanthein Posted February 7, 2006 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2006 :devil Very well said. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Thanks Crank! I'm glad you liked it. I wrote that awhile back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkChylde Posted February 7, 2006 Report Share Posted February 7, 2006 Very nice. keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xanthein Posted February 7, 2006 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2006 Very nice. keep up the good work <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Thanks! I have 15 note books filled with my poetry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Homicidalheathen Posted February 7, 2006 Report Share Posted February 7, 2006 Break me, I think I'd like it. :fear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hellion Posted February 7, 2006 Report Share Posted February 7, 2006 :devil I definately like to see more of your poetry work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xanthein Posted February 8, 2006 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2006 :devil I definately like to see more of your poetry work. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Well I have a website filled with my poetry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikielikesit Posted February 20, 2006 Report Share Posted February 20, 2006 Awesome ...........it makes me want to be just like you..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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