Blood

By Draco1958,
April 23, 2006 in Your Creations

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Posted April 23, 2006

My niece wrote the original version but wasn't happy with it so I asked her if I could rewrite it and say we did it together, she said ok so here it is.

BLOOD

Here I sit with sword to my throat...

Crying from the pain...

Watching the blood run down the blade

and onto my arm...

The crying turns into tears of blood

as the sword goes deeper into my flesh...

As I start to scream from the pain I inflict

the sword is ripped out of my hands

by an Angel...

I know not of what is going on...

I beg for the sword back

so I may finish

but I am told

No, My time has not yet come.

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